Added a complete description with ending spoiler! re read it if you want, its more descriptive, plus I need some yaoi on my life >:C
Shit have you noticed how much description heights I have been typing latelly?? --- Geez stop me from creating alternative universe stories.
Usually when I go listening to music I go daydreaming and creating a scene for the song, usually I think about the same character I own, others about different or new characters, this is how I create stories, based on music.
-Description of the alternative story-
Inspiring Song: Korn (ft. Skrillex and Kill The Noise) - Narcissistic Cannibal [link] Characters: Negative Fausto and Kazuyoshi Satoshi. Differences: Both characters have a totally opposite personality and polarities.
Negative Fausto comes from Negative(name)+Fausto's Polarity(Negative) creating a Possitive result which is Negative Fausto's Polarity(Possitive), it was hard for me to come up with this, as I didnt want to call him evil/dark/bad Fausto or give him a cliche name or reasson. answer: (-)(+)(-)= (+)
A Possitive Polarity always thinks in a possitive way, it also applies to evil wishes and cocky thoughts, but enthusiastic thoughts as well. -''I can win this for sure! I know I can!'' -''I am beautiful, can't you see that?'' -''I could kill you anytime bitch!'' -''We can do it! I know, there is always a way'' -''Dawww you like it when I am around, Don't you?''
On the other side, Negative Polarities tend to be negative as the name implies and realistic thoughts. -''I am a failure!'' -''why do you give me a gift? I am not worth it!'' -''I cannot kill you.. I doubt I could, for sure'' -''Stop thinking like a child and accept the idea that it cannot happen, it was simply never meant to be!'' -''I am a bother to you, ain't I?''
Fausto's Polarity=Negative Negative Fausto's Polarity= Possitive Satoshi's Polarity= Possitive ( but is on the limit to reach a balance with negative).
Plot: The plot follows somehow a bit of the main story(original non-alternative story), but this time, Satoshi and Negative Fausto never meet when young, nor school, Fausto usually gets bullied by others around the city, he has kept all his hate over them for many years, Satoshi, on the other hand, is just another member of the city, living in peace, Fausto usually gets on fights with others around the block.
One time when Satoshi was passing by a different route, after school, he hears some fighting noises but decides not to get into it, as he is a totally opposite personality than Satomi, he prefers not fighting, he is really nice and tends to hang out with people often, he is barely alone, and gets scared easily, he is gentle but careful and takes care of things a lot, he worries a lot too, anyways as he goes to check around where the sounds come from, he finds a beaten up Fausto on a corner, his typical nature tells him to run away, but instead he walks closer to check if he is dead or alive, Fausto is alive indeed and opens his eyes as he hear's Satoshi's voice calling for him, after waking up, Satoshi alarms and attempts to help him stand up and somehow pets his head(lol), Fausto is somehow surprised as no one was nice to him before, but Satoshi was a stranger and instead growls at him, scaring Satoshi somehow, he moves away and says ''glad you are not dead..'' while questioning himself if it is safe to stand to Fausto.
Fausto stands still just staring at him, blood was over his left eye as he was bitten by a group of dogs(bandits and such), Satoshi stay stills, but kills the silence by recommending him some tips on how to fix that wound, Fausto stands still staring(not a creeper at all) ''Well... Follow them and I am sure your eye will be good soon'' Satoshi replied and somehow smiled then returned to his way back home.
Fausto follows his orders and indeed his eye gets well some weeks after, since then Fausto begins to follow Satoshi, somehow he wants to thank him but he has never done that before, so he ends up looking like a creeper(ok yeah now he is a creeper)
Satoshi finds him after school in front of the school, surprised and somehow scared, he replies with ''Oh.. its you heh.. looks like your eye is better now?'' He somehow attempts to start a conversation, Fausto being a failure stand still but somehow mumbles a ''Thank you'', after that Satoshi takes him to a place to eat and so they socialize better, Fausto appears to be a nice guy, carrying an inteligent with a calm nature for Satoshi eyes, he is naive after all, Fausto also appears to be 4 years older than him.
They both socialize good and they become really good friends, Negative Fausto develops a crush on him, but Satoshi does not in return it as he is straight and likes a girl in his school, Things turn out bad when Satoshi gets rejected by that girl and falls into a depression, as she was the girl he had always liked since middle school. Fausto reacts really negative upon this and focuses his main hate upon her, also jealous as he wishes he was on that girl's side, he replies with a low voice tone "I wish I could make you happy" as Fausto watches him lay down without carying for his words.
Once asleep, Fausto leaves the room and goes to find the girl who rejected Satoshi, the hate has turned him in sorta a potential psycho, burning his head , he lays his rage and hate over her, searching for her house around the neighborhood, once he found her, she was asleep, she wakes up though from the noises Fausto did on his way to climb up the window(wtf) an argument is followed with a brutal fight that lefts Fausto attacking the girl and hitting her againts the wall, he keeps on deeply staring at her "Do you regret you answer? no?" "ARE YOU SORRY NOW??" The girl was crying in panic, she didn't know what was happening, struggles on the night, Fausto's jaw was deep on the act, she could barely speak, but it was clear, she was crying.
Fausto then began smashing her skull against the wall, several times till it started to bleed, stating: -"WELL? WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR? DON'T TELL ME YOU FORGOT HOW TO SPELL THAT?"(cause caps lock is awesome) "He smashed once her head and pushed her hard, like the preasure on a pencil ready to write. -''WELL THEN, LET ME SPELL IT FOR YOU'' He then started moving her around the wall, like if she was a brush to paint, blood followed her skull and each move was more painful as the wall was rough and was cutting her skull. "I" Fausto wrote on the wall with blood and her body. Followed by "A" then "M" at this rate her back skull was wide open and there was a blood mess "I AM SORRY" It was done, her skull was wide open and half headless, part of her hair and flesh was stuck on the wall, Fausto smiled, it was more of an impish smile, "There, I show you how to spell it, now spell it back", the girl spelled it while still crying and once done, Fausto cracked her neck, this feeling was different than others, he somehow felt relieved and in peace, he wouldn't had to worry about her messing up with his toy after all.
Satoshi is horrified the nest morning when he finds the crime scene, he gets pissed and blames it all over himself, Fausto was by his side as he slep the night on a different place, but Satoshi believes he slept on his room, Fausto was following him on his way to make sure he would arrive safetly, He regrets not being with her that night and wishes form him to be on her place now, but most of all, the words written on the wall bothers him, he shivers somehow and questiones himself what could that mean, then promisses himself infront of Fausto that he will make sure to put an end on the one that murdered her, he will kill him for sure, his way of saying it was clear, he wanted revange, ''I will make sure to help you kill him'' Fausto replies hopping as help somehow.
As growing up, Fausto begins to kill the bandits around and others who get on his way as a way to let his hate go away, he somehow becomes a psycho, as he does not feel the pain reflected in other's eyes, he enjoys of it and makes him feel good, infront of Satoshi he behaves, and follows orders but something he can no't follow or escape is his feel for hurting, he is not insane though as he can think well and compare, but becomes a murder and no one seems to notice who is the one who is murdering dogs around, until Fausto confesses it to Satoshi and Satoshi keeps it as a secret, being afraid that Fausto could kill him if he ever speaks.(he does not confess that he murdered the girl thought).
Usually Fausto comes into Satoshi's room at nights after killing, pretty much for Satoshi's dislike as he has to clean the blood up, and Fausto enjoys of those moments as he is attracted to Satoshi and tends to stay close to him at any time, and also protects him from others, he gets jealous easily and is not an easy push over, Negative Fausto is clever, really clever and never hessiates, Satoshi has second thoughts all of the times and tends to get away from problems.
The murders keeps on to the point of starting to kill on staff from buildings and such, he has scaped all of the times and hides in Satoshi's room at nights, but Satoshi cannot keep on with it, but he cannot believe that Fausto acts this way, he is just so nice to his eyes.
Ending(Spoilers bitches) After researchs, the cops finally find out about Fausto's murders and go on a hunting game, of course Fausto dosnt want to be captured, his life has been really great since Satoshi and the murders, slow by slow, he kills and slahshes the necks of some of the cops and attempts to make a sucidal move by jumping off from some spiral stairs and grabbing one of the cop's neck(they where on an hotel sorta), The police didn't want to fall for a certain death, Fausto grins as he is hanging from the police's neck and he was danggling from, he kept on moving around attemoting to make him fall, but every move was worst, it was either jump or make the target's neck crack, Fausto was enjoying the moment at his fullest and softly grins in a psychotical way ''Fall, fall, FALL''
Suddenly, someone in a floor down saw them and went to rescue his partnert,(in my story characters have the avility to stand in a huamn possition sorta, they can also grab stuffs and such, I find it nice and helps the story to be better, hopefully it wont look odd when drawing) From the second floor, the cop shot's Fausto, the bullet hits his back leg and makes him let go off and of course makes him fall down, he spins while falling, making him hit up with a lader a floor down and eventually grabs from that one, a second shot is heard, hitting on Fausto's back, he could not feel his wounds for sure.
As he could he broke into some room and jumped off the window(he was on the first floor) and ran to Satoshi;s house as fast as could, there is a blood line trace thought and it was just a matter of time for the cops to tract him down.
Satoshi was about to go sleep when finds Fausto just right infront of an open window, bleeding, it would be the first time Satoshi would clean Fausto's blood, Fausto knew it would be his last time of seen him, after all the murders, he would dye by the letal injection for sure, as Satoshi goes to get some towels to clean him up, Fausto sneaks to the kitchen and grabs a knife hidding it over his back, shit becomes real when Fausto starts to get second thoughts of what he is about to do, on seen Satoshi, now back, Fausto jumps to him and slashes part of his shoulder, it is not a deep wound but it causes it to bleed, Fausto is dying inside as he cannot forgive himself, ''WHY DIDN'T YOU DODGE IT??'' Fausto yells, confused and scared, ''I thought you wouldn't hurt me, you had never done that.'' Satoshi replies, he is not scared thought, he is more like accpeting his behavior, ''Look, its just a wound, its not too bad, I know you are into much latelly so I understand it perfec-'' he gets interupted with Fausto pushing him against a wall (walls making shit real in every story /shot) ''I doubt you can..'' a moment of silence is followed by as no one can seem to come up with an answer, again Satoshi attempts to break the silence like in the first time, but is interupted by Fausto when he approaches his wide opened mouth (fmlhard) and kisses him, socked Satoshi attempts to pull him away but Fausto grabs one of his paws and stops him, he starts to enjoy it after and lets himself carry on, with his other paw, Fausto takes out that knife he had previously and gives it to Satoshi's hand, still both crossed hands and the knife in the middle, Fausto puts the sharp part infront of his chest, Satoshi opens his eyes and notices the knife, this stops the kissing scene as Satoshi stops and gets schocked as he thinks Fausto cannot see where the knife's sharp part is pointing at, and before he can attempt to say something, Fausto pushes him once more against the wall, making the knife burry deep into his chest, making it a fatal wound.
Fausto's body lays over Satoshi and the wall, he embraces Satoshi as well, while Satoshi attempts to move him away and take pull out the knife, he is worried, but Fausto does not let go off the knife, Satoshi is shivering and his emote expresses his feelings, he is afraid, not of Fausto, but does not want him to die, Fausto bleeds quickly and his strength begins to fade, Fausto smiles and closes his eyes stating. ''You said you wanted revange, didn't you?'' His neck is lying over Satoshi's shoulder, blood covers Satoshi and the floor ''You wanted to kill that one who murdered her'' Fausto said, ''Yo-You..'' Satoshi replies with a low but confident tone and places his other paw on the knife, he pushes in deep making Fausto cought twice blood, some tears fall from Satoshi's eyes, ''I promissed I would help you kill him'' Fausto said, ''I am glad I can die in your arms.'' Fausto replies as his last dying words, Satoshi crying returns the hug and holds him tight making sure he would not fall to the floor.
The cops arrive later and find the scene, they pick up the body and take it to the mortuary, after months, Satoshi was convicted of second-degree murder but is declared on probation months later, as it is believed the wound of his body was not self inflicted but rather an attack from the real killer, he is the only one that visits Fausto's grave since then.
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